KEVILL DAVIES

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Wednesday, 11 August 2010

Revision

I have never been happy with the layout of this book.There are two elements to the story which lie with difficulty in various sections of the book and I have therefore decided to split the book into two parts. The first dealing with Hafiz, his evil intent and the piracy and the second the remainder,and greater part of the story to do with Jack and the Voodoo priestess, Bella. In a sense I'm getting the Hafiz part out of the way before embarking on the second; a case of the evil, followed by the ugly before reaching the good as later in the story, the two parts come together again, bringing a more satisfying and rounded conclusion to the whole.

At the moment I am not promoting this book. I shall wait until I have finished Apsaras iii and then try and sell all three books, even if that means amending the original.

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